Although I truly feel happy for Ayesha, that she can escape from her horrible family and start a new life in America, and also got a new nose so that she can have confidence when she face people, and you can obvously see how happy and confident she is comparing the with her old photo. However, I am concerned about Ayesha will be used as a tool for the US government, to gain support from the public as they are showing the are heros in Afghanistan and what they did of starting the war was correct.
The video of the article starts automatically when you start browsing the webpage, which is very good as viewers may not click play and watch the video if they just want to read the text. However, there was a commercial advertisement started before the actual video about the article, it might turn readers off and close the webpage right away.
Also, comparing to the video, the article text has a lot less information about the girl and her new nose. It can be improved by giving more information about what Ayesha say and different opinions from the public about the topic.
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